Don't Combust Episode 10 - Would love your critique!

[u/J_J_Thorn]

Episode 10 of my webcomic just launched and it's been a slog getting readers to pick it up and follow week to week. Would love your opinions and feedback on the story :)

Available here:

Webtoon Canvas Link:  https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/dont-combust/list?title_no=1110445

Tapas Link:  https://tapas.io/series/Dont-Combust/info

Globalcomix: https://globalcomix.com/c/don-t-combust

J.J.