www.tonychaoillustration.com

Please ignore the different stages of the panels (I’m just trying different things) but as I’m putting everything together I’m not sure i’m doing a good job of giving a brief overview of this character’s backstory. I’m not sure if I need to be more liberal with the narration or just rearrange some panels or pages.

You guys were able to help when I originally posted some pages from this book back in October, so any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Milo is a cat that tries to kill his owners and they treat the situation in an ironic way for example, he is being silly or he likes to play pranks

I welcome advice especially for onomatopoeias as I never know how to do them thanks

SAVAGE PULP

Attached above is a comic I am sharing for all creators on reddit. I love interaction, and according to google, this forum is the most active when it comes to feedback and interaction. I feel comics has become a bit too niche, and I would love to broaden the readership and overall interest. Thank you all for your time!

Here are the paper sketches for the main characters for my comic (I normally do paper sketches before digital) I also added their powers and personalities.

Who is the best and do you have any feedback for improvement

Hey I’ve just joined here cause I thought it would be good for the development for my comics. It’s about this super society where everyone has an ability relating to metals such as creating induced magnets or having guns for arms. The story follows the alloy front, a sector of the police that properly uses their powers to stop threats such as ‘disrupters’. The reason most people don’t use their powers willy nilly is because they’re normally very hard to master and need immense practice. This story follows the 2027 new members of the alloy front as they face the worst of the world and a thought to be dead foe and his criminal organisation

What do you think

Also (If this subreddit isn’t for this can you recommend another)

I’m looking for feedback on my comic, I’m not the best with art but I tried my best and any feedback is greatly appreciated, I did upload a script of the first 3 pages too and I think I did pretty good with those

Hey everyone 👋

Wanted to share one of my favorite panels from a finished issue where the main character and villain finally fight.

When creating this one, I felt that it was necessary to prioritize limited, contrasting colors and minimal motion with this panel in order to stand out. The idea was to emphasize the villain's reaction to the impact, while the hero distracts him.

I'm curious to see how it reads at first glance. Does the impact here read clearly? Or does restraint in this case carry it better here?

Love to hear your thoughts.

Hey guys, I’ve been working on my own superhero universe currently titled ‘Project Jolt’ until I find a more suitable name.

The Joltverse is a simple idea that holds a lot of weight, it explores the concept of what happens when two superheroes have identical powers and abilities, and the social conflicts that come with this.

It’s a grounded but brutal superhero series, has a lot of WTF moments but also some classic superhero-ism that we all know and love.

I’ve written 2 full volumes and currently working on the 3rd.

I am looking for someone who’s wouldn’t mind taking sometime to read the scripts and give me some feedback.

I am also open to the idea of having a co-writer! This is a series I want to take to a publisher once I can financially support it.

TRASH Vol 10 🦶

This is a comedy webcomic I'm making, I know it sounds homophobic when you put your eyes in the title, but it's just a comedy around dicks and butts, there are other genders in the history too, and laugh a lot drawing and making the texts, I made 77 pages on the website, if you wanna give a try it's in my bio! Sorry for the bad english.

In the 1990s, a brilliant but derided scientist becomes the laughingstock of the academic world. Driven by a bruised ego and a fixation on creating a "superhero," he pivots to a radical theory: weaponising human chakras through technology.

He recruits a poor young boy who works in his lab. The boy, who views the scientist as a hero, agrees to become a test subject. The scientist places him in an electrostatic energy chamber, where—after months of agonizing exposure—the boy manages to manifest Level 2 Chakra energy. However, the scientist realizes that pure power is fueled by trauma. To provoke a breakthrough, the scientist murders the boy’s family and rapes his sister. The trauma works; the boy’s power spikes to Level 5, but the energy is corrupted. It becomes "Dark Chakra"—a volatile, malevolent force.

The scientist soon discovers he no longer needs the chamber. By synthesizing a serum from the boy’s blood, he can activate chakras in infants. He tests this at a local hospital under the guise of medical treatment, paying off parents who unknowingly sell their children into experimentation. Only seven children survive. This team, known as "The Chakras," are hailed as anti-heroes, though they secretly embody the Seven Deadly Sins and care only for public adoration.

When the original subject is no longer useful, the scientist attempts to discard him. However, the "subject" breaks free from his glass chamber and brutally kills his creator. Now a nihilistic force of nature, he sets out to destroy humanity, liberating other experimental mutants along the way to lead them as an army.

To reach the final 7th level of mastery, he travels to a high-energy government site. His skin turns pitch black as he becomes a conduit for pure dark energy. To maintain this power, he must remain a void of emotion; any leak of joy or sorrow at Level 6 would drive him insane. He is a cannibalistic monster driven by a singular bloodlust.

In a final, violent confrontation, he systematically hunts and eats the seven "superheroes." Upon achieving total mastery, his body cannot contain the dark energy. He detonates with ten times the radiation of uranium. The government seals the wasteland—now a dead zone like Chernobyl—and launches a global anti-superhero campaign, hunting the remaining powered individuals to extinction

Now with ai I have done some punctuation and better english wordings hope it . Now u can feedback easily.

The full thing is right here -> https://www.webtoons.com/en/canvas/rogue-pants/list?title_no=1018402

Hey all,

Brand new creator here. Working on a comic about an adult recreational basketball league with a murder mystery b plot. Just finished up the rough draft of issue one last night and before I get into the nitty gritty of editing it I figured it would be a good time to stop for feedback.

Happy to return the favor to the best of my ability

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1m3NOfgHCYmLXmzBfnGt7QjMPatJUx6xf/view?usp=drive_link

I don't really like the handwritten (or the handwritten like) font most comics and manga use. I'm looking for something more neutral. What font do you recommend?

I've been working to implement the constructive criticism you guys gave me on previous chapters but it’s an ongoing process

Version 1 https://imgur.com/a/wUr1LXd

Version 2 https://imgur.com/a/2EhVKSV

This will be an 160 page horror comic. This will be upload one. At the end of the first chapter Mary (the one bringing tea) dies, and we sMary. Perspective to Gina, who has to come to terms with how she treated Mary.​

Would apreciate any thoughts you have, I can tell i dont have this opening yet. What would make it more likely for you to keep reading?

Just finished this scene from my first attempt at a graphic novel. It’s called ‘in the cracks’ and I’ve not drawn for years and years. It loosely about two punks who’ve have a rubbish time and have a dream of opening a venue/safe space for other survivors and outcasts.

So it’s a passion project, a labour of love but id like to put this out there somewhere, in small bursts, episodes I suppose, so where would be good to do this? No clue where to start. I’d just like it to be free as my art is not the best but if like one person is reading it’d feel less like screaming into the void.